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im just looking for a rise
a chance to pull you out of those pants
and slip my mouth around the hem
while you giggle, and twist away
our smiles catch like colds on brisk winter days
you wont think im so funny soon
ill stab you in the chest
where you missed a button on your shirt
just above your cute new belt where i kissed
grab your veins and tug till they snap
and tear off your ears
scrape down your back
breathing heavy, telling you things are fine,
that you wont die, not this time
your arms are on the ground
teeth are all chipped, no longer neat
and your eyes are broken
but your fingers, i'll keep
im bleeding from my tounge
watch what you believe
everything that comes from my mouth
is stained and can't be cleaned.
a chance to pull you out of those pants
and slip my mouth around the hem
while you giggle, and twist away
our smiles catch like colds on brisk winter days
you wont think im so funny soon
ill stab you in the chest
where you missed a button on your shirt
just above your cute new belt where i kissed
grab your veins and tug till they snap
and tear off your ears
scrape down your back
breathing heavy, telling you things are fine,
that you wont die, not this time
your arms are on the ground
teeth are all chipped, no longer neat
and your eyes are broken
but your fingers, i'll keep
im bleeding from my tounge
watch what you believe
everything that comes from my mouth
is stained and can't be cleaned.
xx
© 2005 - 2024 Abinadi
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Wow...very intense stuff. This creates a wonderfully vivid image of what the narrator seems to have in mind. The rhyming is so un-cheesy, it's perfect. :3
"grab your veins and tug till they snap
and tear off your ears
scrape down your back"
This sent shivers down my spine. Very excellent description and use of basic vocab, giving the poem an eloquence all its own. <3
"grab your veins and tug till they snap
and tear off your ears
scrape down your back"
This sent shivers down my spine. Very excellent description and use of basic vocab, giving the poem an eloquence all its own. <3